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No. 433431
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I hate this fucking show.
>What don't you like?
Too much focus on Raegan's personal life. The side characters are all plain and unfunny, trent sucks. Raegan is too whiny. Ugly af artstyle. Never laughed once.
>How would you fix them?
Make it more action focused, completly ditch the comedy or make the comedy less referential, make Raegan cynical instead of a whiny teenager with daddy issues, give raegan a cool sidekick instead of an annoying normie one, completly kill off Raegan's dad, make the side characters have actual personalities instead of being lolsorandum filler.
Basically, less Bojack/Rick and Morty/Netflix influence and more Venture Bros/Adult Swim influence. What a waste of an amazing concept and cool female protagonist design, i will never forgive the writers but fucking up such a cool concept with their milennial faggotry.
No. 433436
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I actually do like Camp Cretaceous, but it's one those shows which would be better if the main characters were allowed to ACTUALLY be at risk. And if they didn't have to put obligatory "it's okay to have feelings" lessons in some of the episodes.
No. 433438
>>433437I always feel this when shows feature
abusive/dysfunctional parents who spell out exactly which flavour of narc they are and their entire thought process behind being evil kek
No. 433439
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I know this is extremely old news but god, such a cool premise ruined by its own writers.
No. 433443
>>433442I mean, "demons who infiltrate human society to kill targets" DOES have potential for black comedy in and of itself. It's just
everything else about it which sucks, which is why it's in this thread.
No. 433448
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The Man in the High Castle. I had such high hopes for this as a WW2fag who also loves alternate history. It had such a good premise. But the show was so fucking boring and they did nothing with good with it. The finale was so underwhelming too. I was like "That's it? That's what I wasted hours on?" I want
>more focus on John Smith's story
>more alternate reality switching because it's fun seeing the contrast
>epic fight/war scenes
>a good conclusion to the show I wanted John to defeat the Nazis and save America
No. 433449
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Now to mention slop that’s no better than the other slop in this thread kek. This one is a great example.
>keep the very idea of homeworld being an oppressive regime but play the tone of this very straight and serious
>it wasn’t intended for children but for young adults+
>it played more into the horror/sci-fi elements than the comedic/magical girl elements
>it was animated by people who actually know how to draw and animate
>completely different art style, maybe more detailed?
>a lot of the designs and characters would have to be scrapped because they’re offensive to the eyes
>no more bean mouth noodle arm style find something else
>honestly just remove steven from the entire show and rename it, it would’ve been soooo much better and way more interesting if it was solely focused on the three female characters and their relation to rose and homeworld
>rose plot would’ve been good as a murder mystery tbh
>better voice actresses, especially for garnet get an actually talented black woman to do it
>better writers (apparently they didn’t have much writers on this show and it was storyboard driven which shows)
>gendie/tranny pandering kept to a minimum or left out completely
No. 433504
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Frozen 2 is full of incredibly stupid decisions and it makes me so upset because the frozen franchise had so much fun potential… it's been a while since I watched it but here are things I remember letting me down
>Elsa's entire development arc in the first movie is removed, she's back to page 1 so we have to watch her learn the exact same shit she already learned in the first movie about not pushing people away
>Kristoff is turned into a bumbling fool comic relief character
>The voice calling Elsa was disappointingly boring and entirely pointless
I heard they didn't even decide what the voice really was until late in the development which checks out because it seems like they put 0 thought into it.
>The entire "water has memory" bullshit, that's so fucking boring and makes no sense
>The elemental spirits are so random. Elsa is a human with ice powers but also a bridge between all the powers (what?), there is a horse made of literal water, a normal tiny lizard with fire powers, and a wind spirit that is just… actual literal invisible wind. And giants made of rock.
Missed opportunity to make them all into interesting human characters with powers like Elsa, they could even have made dolls and costumes for all of them making it so you have a "fire Elsa"-character and "wind Elsa"-character. People would go wild for toys and costumes and fanart etc… Or even just make them all into cool magical animals so kids can imagine they have magical pets like them. If they had turned them human they could have explored Elsa meeting people with powers like her, finally giving her people to relate to. Maybe one of them thinks having powers make them superior to others, maybe one is ashamed of their powers too, maybe one is trying to get rid of the powers… there's so much they could have done with it.
>The northulda/whatever they were called people are just… offensive
Now I'm not usually one to call "racism reee" but these people are super obviously meant to be Sami people, a white native group of people in Northern Europe. Except they turn them all browner and treat them as sort of "native American" people. It's like they literally cannot grasp that there are white native people unrelated to other native groups in the world.
>They retcon Elsa and Anna's ancestry into being part of this native group, for obvious woke points. But only because they forgot that the real native group is actually also white and they're just double-white now.
>Oh and Kristoff was also a reference to Sami people so now they have made 2 separate bad representations of their culture that aren't even related in-universe
>The plot overall makes no sense AND is boring.
Elsa's power being explained as "she is the bridge between magic and humans" is so lackluster and means nothing. Like literally what does it mean? There's nothing that unlocks, no new missions for her to do. And also the "magic" consists of… a horse made of water and a lizard on fire and those boring guys. There is barely any magic to bridge to to begin with! Creatures like the trolls already have magic, and the humans were fine talking to them already as established in the first movie. It means nothing!!!
No. 433560
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>kills only criminals - he's just a more effective cop and judge than the real cops and judges
>doesn't kill VIPs to suit his political vision
>status quo was never threatened
Can't expect much from shounen manga.
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I don't even have to explain this one.
>How would you fix them?
By removing Gal Gadot and her shitty self insert,That was just so random and it didn't add anything to the plot and also the princesses.this entire movie was basically a very long commercial and I feel bad for anyone who wasted their time and money watching this.
No. 433568
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Wasted character potential. Casca becoming insane after the Eclipse was just Miura's mindbreak fetish. There, I said it.
No. 433601
>>433504Frozen 2 had the opposite problem to the first movie: it needed a villain. Like, REALLY needed a villain. I legitimately can't remember what the characters did for 70% of the runtime. And their decisions made no sense at all.
>Elsa hears a voice, decides she isn't happy anymore for some reason, and everyone just goes along with it>Elsa abandons her sister AGAIN (in a strange land full of dangerous magical creatures?)>Anna decides that the right thing to do is put literally everyone in danger by destroying the dam>Kristoff is angsty about his relationship??There should have been a physical, ominous or manipulative presence to drive the story along and cause the conflict.
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>>433560Misa's entire character is wasted potential too
No. 433621
>>433610she always should have been the one to kill Light. An awakening arc from pickme to awakened would have been amazing. especially after Light kills his first innocent (the detectives)
Also bonus: the black haired female detective was killed off in a dumb way because the author admitted she was smarter than Light and he needed to figure out a way to get rid of her
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This cartoon…
What a shameful.
No. 433639
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>>433621yes to both Misa and Naomi… I used to like Death Note but never liked the way the authors handled the female characters
picrel sounded good as a concept but just turned out to be generic horror trash with cheap jump scares. and it was boring. at least the monster was scary
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>>433424You're talking about this shit? (it's official art).
No. 433666
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I think MHA would've been an enjoyable super hero shounen series but this slop has way too many flaws that I had to drop the anime. I don't read the manga but feel free to add anything else. Here are some of my reasons and changes to make it better:
>do not sexualize the female characters
Shounen has always suffer from this and it's so tiring, unnecessary, distasteful and done to death. Instead, write them better or give them interesting backstories other than fanservice eye candy to horny moids. Might as well sexualize the guys too.
>remove Mineta
He doesn't add anything to the series but being an insufferable sex pest for the "comedy", an annoying cry baby and somehow got into one of the top classes of the school. Also he has a retarded diaper costume. I fucking hate him. It be more tolerable if he was girl perving on hot guys instead.
>Ochako falling in love with Deku was unnecessary and out of nowhere, same with the whole "fighting to be Deku's gf" shit with Toga
Ochako used to be fine as Deku's friend but having a crush on him felt forced like as if he's a self-insert for dweeb loser moids to have girls all over him. It had my eyes rolled since moids can't resist having a female character falling in love with the mc or involve lust in their shounen. It sucks because she was interesting at first on becoming a super hero so she can earn money and help her parents to take it easy since they're kinda poor which I find that sweet of her. Also, her battle with Bakugo was cool too since the audience find it as an unfair match but she kept going until she's out of it. Unfortunately, they had to ruined her as being the stupid love interest for the mc like Hinata from Naruto. Heard that she doesn't get any better later in the series.
>Toga's transformation quirk doesn't make sense
I don't understand how her clothes can transform too and melts away even though she uses blood? They should've stayed on unless she has an illusion quirk but no. It's just a way to see her naked whenever her quirk wears off since she's a waifubait yandere. I hate her.
>redesign Yaoyorozu's hero outfit
Even though she's one of the brightest students in her class, she has a retarded coomshit outfit that's impractical to her object creation quirk by pulling things out of her skin. As seen during the villian ambush in the training grounds, she created a protection sheet from her back which tore her outfit but to also show her boobs by the end of it as fanservice. Ugh, why not give her a sports bra instead of that stupid boob belly window yet her sides and back are being covered? Retarded design.
>Hagakure
Ok I think the whole invisible girl thing is a funny concept but it's weird that she actually goes around naked and of course revealed to be a beautiful 10/10 girl. She could've gotten a suit made with her hairs or cells similar to Mirio's and have it work with her quirk but no. It's another one of those dumb bs just to see fanservice of the girls which is fucking stupid. Yaoyorozu could've gotten a suit made with her hairs or cells too. Also how could Hagakure be so pretty if she can't see herself?
>Bakugo lacks personality other than just being pissed and angry all the time
I know he's the rival to Deku and has an explosion quirk but come on. It's seems like there hasn't been any character development on him at all.
>the anime shouldn't change the girls' bodies
In comparison to the manga, the anime made the girls thinner with less pudge and enlarged Nejire's boobs. Basically further sexualizing them which is so disappointing.
>add more mutant or unconventionally attractive female characters
Compared to the male characters they have a variety of designs but the females are all made to look attractive and fuckable. Even that one giant mutant girl with the pointed nose. Cowards. Recovery Girl was the only good one who's different from the rest.
No. 433711
>>433666Imo the author shouldn't have made the class so large in the first place with a crap ton of adult superheroes on top of the mess if he couldn't commit to adding characterization for all of them.
Giving the mc seven quirks was the biggest mistake over all though, the mc was already too OP, the story should've pushed the "power is too strong for him to handle" and had him use more strategy to fight villans.
The villians were also a problem, the hand guy wasn't much of a magnet on his own and he's just pushed around for the most part. There was no agency and little charisma.
Slimming the story down and putting more effort into character development and progress, also
while Deku becoming a teacher isn't a problem, it really should be foreshadowed earlier, have him enjoying teaching others, chatting with Almight in that direction, helping people out, that sort of thing. No. 433720
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Five Nights at Freddy's, William, Henry, and Michael's story had so much wasted potential. The story became too complicated to hold the attention of its fans by creating a 'mystery' to lead on its followers while Scott made the story as he went, turning it into a cash cow.
The fans are what makes Five Nights at Freddy's enjoyable, and although I'll gladly eat up anything released by this franchise, I choose to believe the story ended with the sixth game. Security breach would have been a great addition to the franchise if it didn't add the Afton ending as well as the whole VR aspect; it should have been a story about a girl (Vanessa) who grew an unhealthy obsession with the killer's crimes and became a copycat killer.
The story of two business partners working towards making their dreams become a reality only to be struck by tragedy due to their own creation makes for an amazing story.
I would depict William as a father who spiraled into madness following the death of his son due to not only his business partner's creation but also his eldest son, which drives him to seek revenge by targeting his son's bullies using the mascot suit to lure, and murder them because he believes that murder will bring him solace.
If I could change a detail from the story, I would change the random children who William killed to the children from the party who had a part in helping Michael lift his brother to the animatronic. I would also make Charlie's death come later after the events that happened possibly being his last child he murdered, being the only body that was found while the others were stuffed in the suit.
I would also explain that the animatronic experienced a failure in the pressure system, which caused its mouth to shut and not release.
I don't think it would have made sense for William to just go forward with rebranding and reopening the restaurant after what happened to his son, so I'd like to imagine Henry, his business partner; refused to let their shared dreams and hard work crumble and decides to continue the restaurant's operations despite the grim circumstances, hoping to both honor their initial vision and provide a sense of normalcy for the community, which causes William to seek revenge, sabotaging and framing him by carrying out the murders by preying on each bully, one by one.
Then lastly William, In a drunken state becomes consumed by jealousy towards Henry, whose life seemed unaffected while he suffered not only losing a child but the destruction of his family life drives him further into madness, convincing himself that Henry's family is somehow responsible for his downfall, and he believes that by taking away someone Henry cherishes he can finally inflict the same pain that he felt.
I like to think that William became who he is because of that event that happened and the aftermath being that his eldest son had a part in his child's death as well as his best friend and business partner.
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It could have been a toku/gang fight show or it could have been a music anime. Instead it's some road trip with boring cut-outs for characters travelling from place to place, the songs suck and the setting is totally wasted. CGDCT = not even once.
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It's a wasted potential as a drama/romance. The trope of an average girl catching the eye of the prince is so overdone. I liked it much better when it was still a story about a nobody (turns out she isn't really a nobody) working in the shadows and romancing a eunuch, with such a union having few future prospects. There is much more tearjerking and drama potential in the latter. I guess it takes too much effort, so let's fall back on the tried and tested trope.
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>>433601>Frozen 2 had the opposite problem to the first movie: it needed a villain. Like, REALLY needed a villain.Yes! How about instead of the voice nonsense a person with fire powers appears to threaten the peace, Elsa can't protect everyone because her ice just melts from the fire. Make the fire guy kinda hot and mysterious. At the same time they fight she realizes they're similar, she's torn between wanting to protect people from the fire guy being evil but it's the first time she's been able to relate to another person with powers so she wants to know more and to "save" him. This guy doesn't even have to end up being a love interest for Elsa, but just put some vague romantic tension there and fans will go wild with speculation and begging for a new movie to see the development between the two. It's a pretty stereotypical route to go, I'll fully admit that, but I think it could work and for most kids who haven't seen/read as many stories yet it still will feel new and exciting.
This way Anna and co would be upset that Elsa has compassion for the evil guy who is trying to kill them all, without Elsa having to be the one to yet again push everyone away like in the first movie. Elsa says she understands what it's like to be seen as the villain, while Anna is angry and says it's different because Elsa never actually was a bad person unlike this guy. There's just so much obvious good and natural tension to be written this way!
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>>433720Like you said, the reason fnaf sucks is all because of Scott, he doesn't know how to properly manage his franchise and lets it all get taken care of by Steel Wool who releases kiddie-slop based on it so he can get dem shekels while he does nothing, my eyes rolled so hard with the newest game trailer and into the pit was a snoozefest. I haven't played any of the new games, there hasn't been a singular decent fnaf game after fnaf 6 and it's sad because the premise of a haunted pizza place with animatronics and a batshit-insane serial killer with a son who tries to undo the shit he caused later in life while suffering throughout all of it (which makes for good whump material) is perfect, but nothing good gets done based on it.
No. 433821
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Sad that they could've had a cute shapeshifting star boy and a villain couple.
No. 433823
>>433821What makes Wish even worse is the fact it was supposed to be a celebratory movie for Disney's 100th anniversary. Such high stakes AND high budget and
that was the best they could do?
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I know this wasn't really the showrunner's fault, but the pairing still counts. It skeeves me out that they were both fighting over the same guy at some point.
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Anything involving him tbh, I'm glad he's public domain now. I love how most of this thread is just Disney fumbling the bag
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I'm surprised no one's mentioned this one yet
>make it actually an open world choose your own adventure type of game like promised i.e. battle gym leaders, titans, team star bosses in any order with proper level scaling
>improve the horrible graphics, animations and glitches
it had the potential to be one of the best pokemon games ever made, but because of time crunch and penny pinching on game freak's part it turned out shitty
No. 433836
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>>433833He is, and his relationship with his wife and children in epic mickey is quite cute too. I hate how they never let artists do anything with him after epic mickey, not even in the european comics, I kinda wish universal still had him because atleast they were using him as a cute japanese mascot while Disney doesn't do anything at all
Also Epic mickey has tons of wasted potential as well kek No. 433838
>>433834Me neither. And I really dislike how you can't customize the MC as much as in the previous 3D games because they have to wear uniforms and all the uniforms are ugly.
>>433832The game is so bad I didn't play online once in case the game would crash even more often than it already did.
No. 433841
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>>433838I just don't get it! I'm pretty sure they made the default protagonists as bland as possible to encourage players to customise them, and yet you're stuck wearing those basic unflattering uniforms no matter where you go! The customisation in SwSh was pretty good and they still put some effort into making the defaults look appealing.
No. 433919
>>433832On one hand yeah the potential was indeed wasted, on the other I still really really loved the game lmao
>>433841>I'm pretty sure they made the default protagonists as bland as possible to encourage players to customise them, and yet you're stuck wearing those basic unflattering uniforms Nah, they went the opposite route and tried to make everyone look the same so we'd all feel like we went to school together. They just made the fugliest uniforms to ever exist, but they want us to look back and feel like there was a universal "look" to the protagonist while giving us the illusion of looking how we want. Sword and shield forces you to wear the challenger uniform in all important battles for the same reason.